Lost in the dark imma feelin' so down
Imma pointed and laughed at like a clown
Men acta likea day own me
Dae acta like they own me
like dae owns me
owns me
de darkness surrounds cannot see
Don't even know whos me
act quietly
hope to die quickly
I've been wronged
wronged
wronged
for to long
long
long
hidin' in the dark try and come to the light
just tryin to use all my might
and win this hard fight
Imma feelin so hurt
tryin not to blurt
tryin not to retort
Hiddin away
don't wanna stay
and forced to lay
This is life day after day
just hopein ah don't have ta stay
just livin this way
OMG, bro. That was a GREAT poem. You should definetely invest more of your time in poetry.
ReplyDeletegreat use of non-standard black english
ReplyDeleteLove it, expresses the raw emotion and character of the speaker, but that is the question who is the speaker?
ReplyDeleteGood use of the black english, very believable. Why is she so dpressed, she is strong as well?
ReplyDeleteThis is great, I really like this, you excelled at poetry this time.
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